A Part 1 from thunderslug's idea

That's right, I said Part 1 because this has hit 4,500 words. This is looking more terribly ambitious in scale. Grrrr. After this is done, the next thing I do is going to be no more than 2,000 words AT THE VERY MOST. I'm having fun with the idea, at least, but I hate deadlines.

( Is this any good thus far? )

For those of you that don't know, it's from a poll that I gave out for random ideas for me to make up a story from.

A Part 1 from thunderslug's idea

That's right, I said Part 1 because this has hit 4,500 words. This is looking more terribly ambitious in scale. Grrrr. After this is done, the next thing I do is going to be no more than 2,000 words AT THE VERY MOST. I'm having fun with the idea, at least, but I hate deadlines.

( Is this any good thus far? )

For those of you that don't know, it's from a poll that I gave out for random ideas for me to make up a story from.