I tend to focus too much on details too and it's a big reason I go back and reread so much when I shouldn't because I like to insert more dialogue, etc. I try going in now with a mission of giving just enough to set a scene but not a full chapter on the state of a couch :P LOL
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Date: 2017-05-22 03:55 pm (UTC)I tend to focus too much on details too and it's a big reason I go back and reread so much when I shouldn't because I like to insert more dialogue, etc. I try going in now with a mission of giving just enough to set a scene but not a full chapter on the state of a couch :P LOL